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2017-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Do you think people who didn't get a formal education can become successful? Explain your answer. Give specific examples to support your opinion. I think people who didn't get a formal education can became successful. There are some people who didn't get a formal edution were successful. If people have one great talent, they can be the best in that ground like singing, painting, sports ect. But ofcourse we should try our best. I partly agree with people who got a formaleducation can be more successful because there are some more oppotunities than people who didn't get a formal education.

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Hi Miss [이름]! It\'s true that education can\'t guarantee success but it is important. It\'s not the most important but it\'s a factor.  It is like a path to success because it leads people to the right path.   Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts.   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Do you think people who didn\'t get a formal education can become successful? Explain your answer. Give specific examples to support your opinion.I think people who didn\'t get a formal education can became successful. >>> I think people who didn\'t get a formal education can become successful. There are some people who didn\'t get a formal edution were successful. >>> There are people who didn\'t get a formal education but became successful.If people have one great talent, they can be the best in that ground like singing, painting, sports ect. >>> If people have one great talent in some areas like singing, painting and others, they can be best in that ground. But ofcourse we should try our best. >>> Correct! [of course]I partly agree with people who got a formaleducation can be more successful because there are some more oppotunities than people who didn\'t get a formal education. >>> I partly agree that people who got a formal education can be more successful because they have more opportunities than those who didn\'t get a formal education.

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