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2017-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Discuss two negative effects of Social Networking Sites. First, people can not see each other so they do anything they want like writing bad words, lying to the others. Second, people don't want to meet people face to face. Some people are really active in social networking sites but when they meet in reality, the relationship will be different.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday! Social networking sites made communication easy. However, it also has a lot of negative effects. Thus, we must be careful when using these sites. I hope you could impart more of your ideas about this topic in class. See you!   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Discuss two negative effects of Social Networking Sites.First, people can not see each other so they do anything they want like writing bad words, lying to the others. >>> First, people can not see each other so they do anything they want like writing bad words or lying.Second, people don\'t want to meet people face to face. >>> OR: Second, some people don\'t want to meet others face to face. Some people are really active in social networking sites but when they meet in reality, the relationship will be different. >>> Correct!

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