homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could change something about yourself, what would it be? Why
I would like to change one of my personality. I strongly believe people's first impression. Sometimes my feeling is correct but most time I realized that there are many good people after I am closed with them.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Miss [이름]!
I am just wondering what personality you\'re talking about here.
I hope you could talk more about it in class.
Thanks!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
If you could change something about yourself, what would it be? WhyI would like to change one of my personality.
>>> OR: I would like to change one of my personality traits.
I strongly believe people\'s first impression.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes my feeling is correct but most time I realized that there are many good people after I am closed with them.
>>> Sometimes my intuition is correct but most of the time, after I met and became close with other people, I realized that there are a lot of good people.
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