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2017-03-02 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Homeschooling is a progressive movement in some countries, in which parents choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to a traditional public or private school. Do you think homeschooling is better than going to a traditional or private school? Why or why not? Homeschooling is good for children but I think it depends on children and parents should really know how they handle this. If you don't know how to manage homeschooling, I think traditional education will be better. There are many good ways to learn but the moct important thing is that we should try to do our best.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for your insight Miss [이름]! Homeschooling is flexible. Homeschoolers have more privileges than those who go to traditional schools. It\'s because they manage their own time. However, homeschooling also has some disadvantages and one of these is lack in socialization for the homeschooler. ~Teacher Shanee^^,   Homeschooling is a progressive movement in some countries, in which parents choose to educate their children at home instead of sending them to a traditional public or private school. Do you think homeschooling is better than going to a traditional or private school? Why or why not?Homeschooling is good for children but I think it depends on children and parents should really know how they handle this. >>> Homeschooling is good for children but I think it depends on how children and parents handle it. If you don\'t know how to manage homeschooling, I think traditional education will be better. >>> Correct! There are many good ways to learn but the moct important thing is that we should try to do our best. >>> Correct! [most]

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