homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Write an essay about your worst vacation ever.
I think I have had every good vacation because whenever I have time, I go on a trip.
And every trip I had was good. I experienced many things. Of course I had bad and good things however every experience has meanings so I don't have worst vacation.
강사 첨삭
Well, you\'re very lucky because all of your vacations were good.
Anyway, I hope you can tell me about them in class.^^
Write an essay about your worst vacation ever.I think I have had every good vacation because whenever I have time, I go on a trip.
>>> I think all of my vacations were good because whenever I had time, I went on a trip.And every trip I had was good.
>>> Correct!
I experienced many things.
>>> Correct!
Of course I had bad and good things however every experience has meanings so I don\'t have worst vacation.
>>> Of course, I had bad and good things. However, every experience has meanings so I don\'t have a worst vacation.
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