Homework
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강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
A wonderful day to you and to your loved ones! ^.^
Thank you for making a good writing! ^^
You should write more.
I like reading your work.
Thanks a lot! ^^,
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy weekend! ^^,
See you! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.
I oppose this plan.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because the movie theater is already near my house, and it\'s enough.
>> CORRECT!
And.. if new movie theater may be built in my neighborhood, it would take long time to built it, and so noisy.
>> And... if a new movie theater is built in my neighborhood, it would take a long time to built it, so it will create too much noise.
I hate that happen.
>> I hate that to happen.
So I oppose this plan.
>> Therefore, I oppose to this plan.
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