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2017-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *CREATIVE WRITING: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun. I oppose this plan. It's because the movie theater is already near my house, and it's enough. And.. if new movie theater may be built in my neighborhood, it would take long time to built it, and so noisy. I hate that happen. So I oppose this plan.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A wonderful day to you and to your loved ones! ^.^


Thank you for making a good writing! ^^

You should write more.

I like reading your work.

Thanks a lot! ^^,


That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy weekend! ^^,

See you! ^^.


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

I oppose this plan.

>> CORRECT!

It\'s because the movie theater is already near my house, and it\'s enough.

>> CORRECT!

And.. if new movie theater may be built in my neighborhood, it would take long time to built it, and so noisy.

>> And... if a new movie theater is built in my neighborhood, it would take a long time to built it, so it will create too much noise.

I hate that happen.

>> I hate that to happen.

So I oppose this plan.

>> Therefore, I oppose to this plan.

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