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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
It is true that these vices make someone a prisoner.
We blindly enjoy them, while they slowly kill us.
I am grateful you quit smoking, Sir!
Cheers to a healthier life!
I\'ve heard that marijuana is much easier to quit than cigarette.
>>I\'ve heard that it is much easier to quit using marijuana than cigarette.
I think cocaine would be much more difficult to give up than marijuana and cigarette.
>>CORRECT!
I\'ve never smoked marijuana or snorted cocaine in my life, but I had smoked cigarettes for about 30 years.
>>CORRECT!
Quitting smoking is almost impossible for some people.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, I could imagine why drugs are so powerful in getting hold of a person and not allowing them to let go.
>>CORRECT!
First of all, smoking gives smokers some distorted pride such as becoming an adult, looking thoughtful, looking sexy, and so on.
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Secondly, cigarette contains nicotine that makes smokers addicted.
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That is why once someone smokes, the nicotine makes them prisoners.
>>CORRECT!
Thirdly, smoking seems to work when smokers get stressed out, feel depressed and worry about something, even though smokers are mistaken.
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Lastly, smokers might feel distorted comrade consciousness to each other.
>>CORRECT!
Smokers tend to sympathize with each other.
>>CORRECT!
This could lead smokers to hesitate giving up smoking.
>>CORRECT!
To my experience, one of the best methods to quit smoking is feeling disgusted about smoking and praying to God.
>>According to my experience, one of the best methods to quit smoking is feeling disgusted about it and praying to God.
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