homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Good job for another accomplished homework!
I got to know your ideas regarding computers.
Well, computers are really helpful and they made our lives so convenient.
However, they also have a lot of disadvantages. And I hope we could talk about them one of these days.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think I can live without computer.
>>> Correct!
One reason why I can live without it is I only use it when I do homework that needs researches and to check on emails.
>>> Correct!
But I think I can go to library to search for information and I can just meet my friends in person.
>>> But I think I can go to a library to search for information and I can just meet my friends in person.
I think it\'s true that computers make our lives easier because if your friend lives in another country, you can\'t meet them whenever you want to talk.
>>> I think it\'s true that computers make our lives easier if your friends live in another country, you can\'t meet them whenever you want to talk.
It might be easier to search for information on computer than find books that might help you, I think finding books for an answer is better than using computer.
>>> It might be easier to search for information on the internet than find books that might help you, but finding books for an answer is better than using a computer.
You can learn more from a book, and even when you don\'t find the answer you were looking for, you learn more about the category and you can improve on reading books to find specific information.
>>> You can learn more from a book, and even when you don\'t find the answer you are looking for, you can learn more about the category. Also, you can improve your book research skills.
Another reason I can live without computer is because humans lived just fine without computer before it was invented, and even then, they just used it for calculations.
>>> Another reason I can live without a computer is because humans lived just fine without it before it was invented, and even then, they just used it for calculations.
I don\'t see why humans would suddenly need computers to survive.
>>> Correct!
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