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2017-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city? It is a big truble to be in the unfamiliar city. I don't really like to go to the new place. But I can't avoid to be the new places. There are many ways to find my ways like using the map, goIgling, asking others etc. I prefer to ask others. It is easy and easy to get ssome information. Sometimes I can get good friends through it.

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Hi there! I can\'t wait to talk with you again Miss [이름]! Anyway, it\'s only a few minutes from now. I hope you\'re ready.^^ See you and thanks for this.   ~Teacher Shanee^^,   What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?It is a big truble to be in the unfamiliar city. >>> It is a big trouble to be in an unfamiliar city. I don\'t really like to go to the new place. >>> I don\'t really like to go to a new place. But I can\'t avoid to be the new places. >>> But I can\'t avoid to be in new places. There are many ways to find my ways like using the map, goIgling, asking others etc. >>> Correct! [googling] I prefer to ask others. >>> Correct! It is easy and easy to get ssome information. >>> Correct!  [some] Sometimes I can get good friends through it. >>> Correct!

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