homework
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What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?
It is a big truble to be in the unfamiliar city. I don't really like to go to the new place. But I can't avoid to be the new places. There are many ways to find my ways like using the map, goIgling, asking others etc. I prefer to ask others. It is easy and easy to get ssome information. Sometimes I can get good friends through it.
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What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city?It is a big truble to be in the unfamiliar city.
>>> It is a big trouble to be in an unfamiliar city.
I don\'t really like to go to the new place.
>>> I don\'t really like to go to a new place.
But I can\'t avoid to be the new places.
>>> But I can\'t avoid to be in new places.
There are many ways to find my ways like using the map, goIgling, asking others etc.
>>> Correct! [googling]
I prefer to ask others.
>>> Correct!
It is easy and easy to get ssome information.
>>> Correct! [some]
Sometimes I can get good friends through it.
>>> Correct!
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