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2017-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are the things that you need to sleep on? ==> In my case, I have to consider when I buy a new golf clubs. It is very important thing to me if I bought new golf clubs, I have to use long time. So when I have a plan to buy them, I should check a lot of things what golf clubs are suitable for me. As you know, golf clubs are very expensive to buy. And my wife doesn't like spending money that kind of things. Anyway, I commonly choose them by price and the brand name. I am armature golfer so I don't have many chances to change my golf clubs. So I need to sleep on many things to change them seriously.

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I remember this, James! It\'s just that, you missed one thing. You also told me once that your wife doesn\'t want you to spend on them, but she would want brand new equipment for herself. Please correct me if I\'m wrong. I must have been fooled by my memory again. Nonetheless, I\'m just glad that you really sleep on some matters. Remember that I always wish you well. Keep safe, James! -Klein- What are the things that you need to sleep on?==>In my case, I have to consider when I buy a new golf clubs.>>In my case, I have to consider buying new golf clubs. It is very important thing to me if I bought new golf clubs, I have to use long time. >>It is a very important thing to me, because if I bought new golf clubs, I would have to use them for a long time.So when I have a plan to buy them, I should check a lot of things what golf clubs are suitable for me.>>So when I have a plan to buy them, I should check a lot of things like what golf clubs are suitable for me. As you know, golf clubs are very expensive to buy.>>Correct! OR >> As you know, golf clubs are very expensive. And my wife doesn\'t like spending money that kind of things.>>And my wife doesn\'t like spending money on those kinds of things.Anyway, I commonly choose them by price and the brand name. >>Correct!I am armature golfer so I don\'t have many chances to change my golf clubs.>>I am an amateur golfer, so I don\'t have many chances to change my golf clubs. So I need to sleep on many things to change them seriously. >>Correct!

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