homework
학생이 쓴 원문
you talk about two people who have influenced your life?
1. My friends .
My friends have influenced my life ! When they make me sad , and happy , and angry !
We fought a lot and get a scratch in our heart . But i think I learned a lot from the course.
2. My teacher
I love my elementary school teacher.. ! Although i can't have class with her, but i learned a lot from her. So i visit her often.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^_-
Happy Monday!
Good job! You answered your homework nicely.
I\'m glad that you are learning a lot from you exeperiences.
Thank you so much for this composition.
I can\'t wait to talk to you again. I\'ll call you again tomorrow! :)
See you then!
_T. Mayleen (^.^)
1. My friends .My friends have influenced my life !
>> Correct!
HOWEVER, BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPACING.
When they make me sad , and happy , and angry !
>> They make me sad, angry, and happy.
We fought a lot and get a scratch in our heart . But i think I learned a lot from the course.
>> We fought a lot and hurt each other emotionally. Bu I think I learned a lot from those experiences.2. My teacherI love my elementary school teacher.. !
>> Correct!
Although i can\'t have class with her, but i learned a lot from her. So i visit her often.
>> Although I can\'t have a class with her, I still learn a lot from her. That is why I visit her often.
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