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2017-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

you talk about two people who have influenced your life? 1. My friends . My friends have influenced my life ! When they make me sad , and happy , and angry ! We fought a lot and get a scratch in our heart . But i think I learned a lot from the course. 2. My teacher I love my elementary school teacher.. ! Although i can't have class with her, but i learned a lot from her. So i visit her often.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]!^_- Happy Monday!   Good job! You answered your homework nicely. I\'m glad that you are learning a lot from you exeperiences. Thank you so much for this composition. I can\'t wait to talk to you again. I\'ll call you again tomorrow! :) See you then!   _T. Mayleen (^.^)   1. My friends .My friends have influenced my life ! >> Correct! HOWEVER, BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPACING.   When they make me sad , and happy , and angry ! >> They make me sad, angry, and happy. We fought a lot and get a scratch in our heart . But i think I learned a lot from the course. >> We fought a lot and hurt each other emotionally. Bu I think I learned a lot from those experiences.2. My teacherI love my elementary school teacher.. ! >> Correct!   Although i can\'t have class with her, but i learned a lot from her. So i visit her often. >> Although I can\'t have a class with her, I still learn a lot from her. That is why I visit her often.

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