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I am deeply impressed by these people, Sir!
I really admire their selflessness even though they themselves have nothing.
Thank you for writing this moving paragraph~
I cannot wait to hear your voice tomorrow!
Someone said, \"Success is to be measured not so much by the position that one has reached in life as by the obstacles which one has overcome.
>>Someone said, \"Success is to be measured not so much by the position that one has reached in life but by the obstacles which one has
overcome.\"
I believe that this type of people are respected most in our society.
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According to the daily newspaper, a 50-year-old female judge was appointed as one of the Constitutional Court nine judges yesterday.
>>According to a daily newspaper, a 50-year-old female judge was appointed as one of the nine Constitutional Court judges yesterday.
After her father died young, she had to play the real role of the breadwinner, studying and making money for her family.
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Overcoming and persevering a lot of adversity, she passed the bar examination and has been doing her job for the weak and poor.
>>Overcoming and persevering a lot of adversities, she passed the bar examination and has been doing her job for the weak and poor.
A married couple who are a singer and an actress have been donating about 30,000 dollars every month for orphans and poor students even though they don\'t have their own house and any installment savings.
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There are tremendous people who have been showing their service, dedication and sacrifice with their money and talent for weak and poor Koreans and foreigners all over the world.
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They are real heroes who have to be respected most in our society because they don\'t live a selfish life, but a selfless life.
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