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2017-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If you could choose a talent, what would you like to have. Why? I could have an execellent memorizing skill. I think that memorizing skill is based on everything like studing, working and so on. Most people have experienced that we forgot to do something or to bring some belongings. I am also very forgetful so I sometimes screw up the work when I work. That is so embarrassing. If I could choose a talent, I would choose this super power.

강사 첨삭

Good day Miss [이름]!

I also need that.

I\'m becoming more and more forgetful these days.

If only we could choose a talent, I would also choose this. Haha!

Anyway, thanks and see you tomorrow.

 

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

If you could choose a talent, what would you like to have. Why?

I could have an execellent memorizing skill.

>>> Correct! [excellent]

I think that memorizing skill is based on everything like studing, working and so on.

>>> Correct! [studying]

Most people have experienced that we forgot to do something or to bring some belongings.

>>> Most people experienced forgetting to do or bring some belongings.

I am also very forgetful so I sometimes screw up the work when I work.

>>> Correct!

That is so embarrassing.

>>> Correct!

If I could choose a talent, I would choose this super power.

>>> Correct!

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