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2017-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The children prepared the picnic. The picnic was prepared by the children. 2. A local boy delivers the newspaper every day. The newspaper is deliverd by a local boy every day. 3. Shakespeare wrote The Merchant of Venice. The Merchant of Venice was written by Shakespeare. 4. The waitress took our order. Our order was taken by the waitress. 5. We will give a summary to each participant. A summary will be given to each participant. 6. Julie will drive you to the station. You will be driven to the station by Julie. 7. Both India and China produce tea. Tea is peoduced by both India and China. 8. Everyone in the office uses the computer. The computer is used everyone in the office. 9. The Prime Minister will make a statement shortly. A statement will be made the Prime Minister.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Miss [이름]!

Sentences 8 and 9 are almost correct. You just forgot to add some short words.

Anyway, Kindly go over them.

I\'ll check your other homework.

~Teacher Shanee^^,]

 

1. The children prepared the picnic.
The picnic was prepared by the children.
>>> Correct!
2. A local boy delivers the newspaper every day.
The newspaper is deliverd by a local boy every day.
>>> Correct! [delivered]
3. Shakespeare wrote The Merchant of Venice.
The Merchant of Venice was written by Shakespeare.
>>> Correct!
4. The waitress took our order.
Our order was taken by the waitress.
>>> Correct!
5. We will give a summary to each participant.
A summary will be given to each participant.
>>> Correct!
6. Julie will drive you to the station.
You will be driven to the station by Julie.
>>> Correct!
7. Both India and China produce tea.
Tea is peoduced by both India and China.
>>> Correct! [produced] [produced]
8. Everyone in the office uses the computer.
The computer is used everyone in the office.
>>> The computer is used by everyone in the office.
9. The Prime Minister will make a statement shortly.
A statement will be made the Prime Minister.

>>> A statement will be made by the Prime Minister.

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