homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thanks a lot Miss [이름]! got to know your ideas regarding computers.
Well, computers are really helpful and they made our lives so convenient.
However, they also have a lot of disadvantages. And I hope we could talk about them one of these days.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
It is been said that computer made our life easier. Do you think you can live without a computer? Why or why not?
Of course.
>>> Correct!
Computers are an execellent invention.
>>> Correct! [excellent]
People can work at home, go for a shop, even study.
>>> Correct!
Computers have been changing our lives alot.
>>> Correct! [a lot]
I can not imagime that living without computers.
>>> I can\'t imagine living without computers.
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