Homework

Dear [이름],

A winsome Wednesday to you! ^.^

I also think that both sides are correct.

I really hope no more harm will the Earth get.

I am just so sad, because we can\'t avoid consequences from what we do to have better lives.

Anyway, enjoy writing and reading! ^^

See you soon! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activities. Others feel that human activities make the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.

In my opinion, both of the suggestions are right.

>> CORRECT!

Human activites make Earth a better place to live, but it causes Earth being harmed.

>> Human activities make Earth a better place to live, but it causes the planet being harmed.

So we need to find the way to compromise them.

>> Therefore, we need to find ways to compromise them.

Before we make the technologies, we must find the way to reduce the amount of damages that Earth will be harmed, and make an effort to Earth\'s environment return; like plant a tree, save water etc.

>> Before we make the technologies, we must find the ways to reduce the amount of damages that the Earth will get and make an effort to bring it back to its original state.