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Great job [이름]!
Thanks for sharing those to me.
I\'m just wondering about the size of the globe.
I really want to buy a big one that also lights up for my son.
I already have two small globes at home.
I hope I\'ll be able to find something like yours.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
The most meaningful gift I\'ve ever received was my fifth birthday present.
>>> Correct!
On my fifth birthday, my grandfather gave me a globe of this world.
>>> On my fifth birthday, my grandfather gave me a globe.
It could also light up if I turned on the switch.
>>> Correct!
I was into geography of the world and the globe would let me see the countries and their landscape.
>>> Correct!
When I was six, I got interested in space and planets and stars.
>>> When I was six, I got interested in space, planets and stars.
I used to do experiments with the globe. Such as using flashlight to explain days and nights, different temperatures in different countries and how some northern parts of the world has over a month of nights.
>>> I used to do experiments with the globe such as using a flashlight to explain days and nights, the different temperature in different countries and how some places in the northern part of the world has over a month of nights.
When I got older, I used my globe to do my homework about latitude and longitude and equators.
>>> When I got older, I used my globe to do my homework about latitude. longitude and equators.
The globe meant many things for me, but one of the reasons why it\'s the most meaningful gifts I\'ve ever received is because of the consideration and care that the giver had put in when he chose that particular gift.
>>> The globe meant many things to me but one of the reasons why it\'s the most meaningful gift I\'ve ever received is because of the consideration and care that the giver had put in when he chose that particular gift.
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