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Are you jocular?
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I think I'm not funny because I can't speak humorously and I don't have talent to make a smile someone.
I always am serious and there is no humor when I say with someone.
So sometimes someone feel boring when I say.
And I am not good at speaking. Sometimes I forget what I say when I am speaking.
It's a serious problem and I know that but It is very difficult to fix it.
I'm very nervous when I have to present something in front of my big boss.
I envy some person who speaks fluently in front of big boss.
As a result of these facts, I am not jocular.
강사 첨삭
Cheer up!
I have this view that every one of us is jocular in our own ways. As for you, you always make me laugh! This is true! And so, it depends on the people involved and on the circumstance. That\'s just my opinion, though, so don\'t think too deeply.
Your concern below is also my concern. I definitely get nervous when put in that situation. The thing here is that we need to control the nerves. Practice may do the trick, so keep exposing yourself to things that may challenge your weaknesses.
I hope that our practice would make you more confident in speaking with others.
Take courage!
-Klein-
Are you jocular?==>I think I\'m not funny because I can\'t speak humorously and I don\'t have talent to make a smile someone.
>>I think I\'m not funny because I can\'t speak humorously and I don\'t have the talent to make someone smile.I always am serious and there is no humor when I say with someone.
>>I always am serious and there is no humor in what I say to someone.So sometimes someone feel boring when I say.>>So sometimes, someone feels bored when I speak.
And I am not good at speaking.
>>Correct
Sometimes I forget what I say when I am speaking.>>Correct
It\'s a serious problem and I know that but It is very difficult to fix it.>>Correct
I\'m very nervous when I have to present something in front of my big boss.>>Correct
I envy some person who speaks fluently in front of big boss.>>I envy some person who speaks fluently in front of the big boss.
>>I envy some persons who speak fluently in front of the big boss.
As a result of these facts, I am not jocular.
>>Correct
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