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2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

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i'm favorite program is human ducu. i like resemble human life. also i like read a poem , i'm very happy. i'm understand novenst mind. becouse i think people enjoy life. and watch movie and read a book is very important.

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i\'m favorite program is human ducu.
>> My favorite program is Human Documentaries.

i like resemble human life.
>> It is about a human\'s life.

also i like read a poem , i\'m very happy.
>> I also like to read poems because it makes me happy.

i\'m understand novenst mind becouse i think people enjoy life.
>> I understand it because I think people should enjoy life.

and watch movie and read a book is very important.
>> I also like to watch movies.
 
read a book is very important.
>> Reading books is very important too.

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