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2017-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Someone who will soon turn 80 years old regrets that he has passed time aimlessly after retiring at 60. He was so proud of his first half of life at the time when he retired from a public office, because he had done his best and saved enough money for his old age. Now that he is looking back over his past 20 years, he can't be satisfied at all. When he retired he thought that he didn't have to work any more. It was too tired for him to keep working more, so his past 20 years was not meaningful, constructive and productive. It's never too late to right wrongs. Therefore, he decided to take some cyberclasses in college and he began to prepare for returning to farming. Returning to farming may be challenging given his age, but needless to say, his challenge emphasizes that we stop living when we stop progressing. Compared to him, my life doesn't seem that gloomy. "If you can't fly then run, if you can't run then walk, if you can't walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward," said Martin Luther King.

강사 첨삭

Trying new things is definitely better than not doing them at all.

I\'d rather live a challenging life than live it with regrets :)

Thank you for doing your homework, Sir!

See you on Monday~

Someone who will soon turn 80 years old regrets that he has passed time aimlessly after retiring at 60.

>>CORRECT!
He was so proud of his first half of life at the time when he retired from a public office, because he had done his best and saved enough money for his old age.

>>CORRECT!
Now that he is looking back over his past 20 years, he can\'t be satisfied at all.

>>CORRECT!
When he retired he thought that he didn\'t have to work any more.

>>When he retired, he thought that he didn\'t have to work anymore.
It was too tired for him to keep working more, so his past 20 years was not meaningful, constructive and productive.

>> It was too tiring for him to keep working more, so his past 20 years was not meaningful, constructive and productive.
It\'s never too late to right wrongs.

>>CORRECT!
Therefore, he decided to take some cyberclasses in college and he began to prepare for returning to farming.

>>CORRECT!
Returning to farming may be challenging given his age, but needless to say, his challenge emphasizes that we stop living when we stop progressing.

>>CORRECT!
Compared to him, my life doesn\'t seem that gloomy.

>>CORRECT!
\"If you can\'t fly then run, if you can\'t run then walk, if you can\'t walk then crawl, but whatever you do you have to keep moving forward,\" said Martin Luther King.

>>CORRECT!

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