homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Perhaps you\'re having your exam now.
I hope that you\'ll get good scores.
Anyway, authors are truly admirable.
I also admire their creativity. ^^
Thanks for writing this.
I\'ll see you on Monday.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
The person I admire the most is author of all the good books I\'ve read.
>>> The people I admire the most are the author of all the good books I\'ve read.
One reason why I admire them is because they didn\'t give up no matter how long it took them to publish just one book.
>>> Correct!
They check and recheck their spellings and grammar and they make sure everything is in order.
>>> Correct!
I admire their ability to get however creative as they want to be and their consistency in publishing one book.
>>> Correct!
They must have had a hard time at some point, but they didn\'t give up.
>>> Correct!
What I admire the most is all the effort they had put in writing just one book.
>>> Correct!
They put all the effort in trying to be their best.
>>> Correct!
It must be difficult for them, even if it\'s their job.
>>> Correct!
I admire their effort and their courage in starting a book.
>>> Correct!
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