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2017-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

The person I admire the most is author of all the good books I've read. One reason why I admire them is because they didn't give up no matter how long it took them to publish just one book. They check and recheck their spellings and grammar and they make sure everything is in order. I admire their ability to get however creative as they want to be and their consistency in publishing one book. They must have had a hard time at some point, but they didn't give up. What I admire the most is all the effort they had put in writing just one book. They put all the effort in trying to be their best. It must be difficult for them, even if it's their job. I admire their effort and their courage in starting a book.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Perhaps you\'re having your exam now.

I hope that you\'ll get good scores.

Anyway, authors are truly admirable.

I also admire their creativity. ^^

Thanks for writing this.

I\'ll see you on Monday.

 

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

The person I admire the most is author of all the good books I\'ve read.

>>> The people I admire the most are the author of all the good books I\'ve read.

One reason why I admire them is because they didn\'t give up no matter how long it took them to publish just one book.

>>> Correct!

They check and recheck their spellings and grammar and they make sure everything is in order.

>>> Correct!

I admire their ability to get however creative as they want to be and their consistency in publishing one book.

>>> Correct!

They must have had a hard time at some point, but they didn\'t give up.

>>> Correct!

What I admire the most is all the effort they had put in writing just one book.

>>> Correct!

They put all the effort in trying to be their best.

>>> Correct!

It must be difficult for them, even if it\'s their job.

>>> Correct!

I admire their effort and their courage in starting a book.

>>> Correct!

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