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2017-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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The saddest thing in my life was when I broke up with my grilfriend. I met her for 4 years and We had promised to love each other for a long time. but Last year sadly I broke up with her. At that time, I cried many. For 2 Weeks, I could not do anyting. But Now I overcame the grief. Sometimes I used to think her. -I have a question- For example, man's name is Brian Chan.( Maybe he is chinese) When I send a e-mail to him for the first time, Which is right between "Dear [Name]" and "Dear [Name].Brian". and What's difference between them? Thanks.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!


Your saddest experience is really sad. But don\'t worry there are a lot of girls which is more deserving for you. Be strong with that, I answered your question and remember that. See you tomorrow. Take care :)


Teacher Travis.


The saddest thing in my life was when I broke up with my grilfriend.

>>Correct.
 I met her for 4 years and We had promised to love each other for a long time.

>>Correct.

>>OR: We\'ve been together for 4 years and we promised that we love each other forever.
 but Last year sadly I broke up with her. At that time, I cried many. For 2 Weeks, I could not do anyting. But Now I overcame the grief. Sometimes I used to think her.

>>But I broke up with her last year, at that time, I cried a lot for 2 weeks, I couldn\'t do anything. But Now I overcame the grief. Sometimes I used to think her.


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\"Dear [Name]\" and \"Dear [Name]. [Name]\".  This are both right, but always remember that sending an email or writing a letter(because this is a formal conversation with you and Mr. [Name]) we should always use Mr., Ms. or Ma\'am. If Brian is your best friend you can call him as \"Brian\" but if Brian is you Boss or some that is higher or even you don\'t know him yet it is appropriate to use \"Mr. [Name]\" (always use his/her complete name).

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