homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름]!!
thanks for sparing time to write a composition. I really appreciate it!! Keep it up!! you are almost there!!
~Teacher Megan~
I read the book that the moment of great decision.
>>> I read a book and that is the moment of a great decision.
This book has story that successful peoples select the right way without regret at forked road of life.
>>> This book has a story about successful people who selected the right way without regretting at the forked road of life.
They had always conflicted of decision that satisfied with their stable present situation or challenge the another difficult.
>>> They had always conflicted on decisions that satisfied their stable present situation or challenge the another difficult.
They always believed themselves and chose the way of challenge
>>> Correct.
They were sure of their success.
>>> Correct.
I would be face to choose a forked road of life soon.
>>> I would be face to choose at the forked road of life soon.
when I do, I have to choose a challenge in confidence and positive attitude as like success peoples.
>>> when I do, I have to choose the challenge in confidence and positive attitude as what successful people chose.
I have inspired by this book.
>>> I was inspired by this book.
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