Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Who among the people you know of is more judicious?
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I think that my wife is more judicious who among the people I know of.
Because she is smart and she suggest her opinion reasonably when we need to decide something.
Sometimes her opinion is not good because she is a human, so we talk about it and we make our opinion.
She doesn't hesitate us to talk about it because she has a open mind.
And she read a lot of books when she has time.
It is very helpful for her and she does indirect experience through the books.
It is also important and helpful when we decide something.
강사 첨삭
You better let your wife read this, James!
She will be so pleased, even more pleased than I am, I swear!
Thank you for sharing it with me and somehow, completing my weekend. This is simply awesome, my friend!
I know that I would read more of this kind of composition where you praise the ones that you love. It is always healthy to appreciate the existence of your loved ones, my dear.
Keep it up!
I only made a few changes in your statements below. Please raise your questions if you got some.
Once again, thank you!
Now, I can hit the hay.
Have a wonderful time, James!
-Klein-
Who among the people you know of is more judicious?
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I think that my wife is more judicious who among the people I know of. Because she is smart and she suggest her opinion reasonably when we need to decide something.
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I think that my wife is more judicious who among the people I know of. Because she is smart and she suggest her opinion reasonably when we need to decide something.
>>I think that my wife is most judicious among the people I know of, because she is smart and suggests her opinions reasonably when we need to decide on something.
Sometimes her opinion is not good because she is a human, so we talk about it and we make our opinion.
>>Sometimes her opinion may not be good because she is just human, so we talk about it and we make up our minds.
>>Sometimes her opinion may not be good because she is just human, so we talk about it and we make up our minds.
She doesn\'t hesitate us to talk about it because she has a open mind.
>>She doesn\'t hesitate to talk about it because she has an open mind.
>>She doesn\'t hesitate to talk about it because she has an open mind.
And she read a lot of books when she has time.
>>And, she reads a lot of books when she has time.
>>And, she reads a lot of books when she has time.
It is very helpful for her and she does indirect experience through the books.
>>It is very helpful to her as she indirect experiences through the books.
>>It is very helpful to her as she indirect experiences through the books.
It is also important and helpful when we decide something.
>>It is also important and helpful when we decide on something.
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