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2017-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If I could master a skill, I think I'd want to master a skill that can fix when things are broken. If I master that skill, many things wouldn't have had to go to trash. You can reuse or recycle them, and it would help our environment. Many pollutions are from trashes that could be used again when you fix it, but many people doesn't because it takes time and effort. I think if I had the skill, it could help with pollution problem. Another reason why I would want to master this skill is because it can save lots of money. You could fix things instead of buying a new one which would waste both time and money. It costs to trash some furniture and computers. If I could fix those things, we could reuse them and save money when it costs to trash them.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!

I think that\'s not impossible to happen.

A lot of people learn the skill that you mentioned.

You can also learn that skill easily if you put your heart into it.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

 

If I could master a skill, I think I\'d want to master a skill that can fix when things are broken.

>>> Correct!

If I master that skill, many things wouldn\'t have had to go to trash.

>>> Correct!

You can reuse or recycle them, and it would help our environment.

>>> Correct!

Many pollutions are from trashes that could be used again when you fix it, but many people doesn\'t because it takes time and effort.

>>> Many types of pollution are caused by the trashes that could be used again when you fix them, however many people don\'t do it because they think it only takes time and effort.

I think if I had the skill, it could help with pollution problem.

>>> Correct!

Another reason why I would want to master this skill is because it can save lots of money.

>>> Correct!

You could fix things instead of buying a new one which would waste both time and money.

>>> Correct!

It costs to trash some furniture and computers.

>>> It\'s costly to have some furniture and computers repaired.

If I could fix those things, we could reuse them and save money when it costs to trash them.

>>> If I could fix those things, we could reuse them and save money instead of throwing them.

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