homework

Dear [이름]!!

You did great on your composition! Keep it up!!

~Teacher Megan

HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:

I can do anything that someone else can do work in my department of company

>>> I can do any work that someone else can do in my department in the company.

 the other way, someone else in a same position can do that I can do work 

>>>  On the other hand, someone else in a same position can do the my work.

 it is merely difference about to do well or to do bad.

>>> the mere difference is about doing it well or bad.

 therefore, we are always confronted by risk of unemployment. 

>>>  Correct.

 if a mount of work reduce in a company , someone of us should be lose a job

>>>  if an mount of work is reduce in a company , someone of us might lose a job.
 

this is a reality. 

>>> Correct.

 
thus, we have to effort in order to get more ability than someone else has ability.

>>> thus, we have to put effort in order to learn more ability that someone else has.