Homework
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When was the last time you got the short end of the stick?
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I sometimes got the unfair treatment from my wife.
When I come back home, she start to lay on the sofa and ask me to do something what she wants.
The reason why she does like this is that she had hard work before I came back home, so she needs a break.
As you know I always speak to say "I am tired and I want to take a rest."
but my wife doesn't agree with my opinion and also my daughter is the same thought with my wife.
My daughter is waiting for me for playing games at night and I have to play games with my daughter when I come back home.
If I have a lot of company works what I do at home, I have to do it after they go to bed.
So I think I always get a short end of the stick when I am home.
강사 첨삭
Oh my, James! I think your wife and your daughter simply want to have you around. You are always at work, so when you get home, they really want to feel your presence. Don\'t you think that\'s sweet?
If you feel that you are getting the short end of the stick, do not hesitate to tell your wife in a very sweet manner. You have to be very careful, my friend.
But as long as you are able, I think it won\'t be a problem. Extend your patience, my dear, and I am sure you will be delighted to see the results.
All the best!
-Klein-
When was the last time you got the short end of the stick?==> I sometimes got the unfair treatment from my wife.
>>I sometimes get an unfair treatment from my wife.When I come back home, she start to lay on the sofa and ask me to do something what she wants.
>>When I come back home, she starts lying on the sofa and asks me to do something that she wants.The reason why she does like this is that she had hard work before I came back home, so she needs a break.>>The reason that she does this is that she has hard work before I come back home, so she needs a break.
As you know I always speak to say \"I am tired and I want to take a rest.\">>As you know, I always say, \"I am tired and I want to take a rest.\"
but my wife doesn\'t agree with my opinion and also my daughter is the same thought with my wife.>>But my wife doesn\'t agree to my opinion and even my daughter has the same thought as my wife.
My daughter is waiting for me for playing games at night and I have to play games with my daughter when I come back home.>>My daughter is waiting for me to play games at night and so I have to play games with my daughter when I come back home.
If I have a lot of company works what I do at home, I have to do it after they go to bed.>>If I have much company work that I have to do at home, I have to do them after they go to bed.
So I think I always get a short end of the stick when I am home.
>>Correct
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