homework

HELLO [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework and thank you for sharing your experiences on both countries. ^^

If you have any questions, don\'t hesitate to ask me.

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia

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I have been to Australia and China.

>> CORRECT  

Two countries are both impressive and interesting for me.

>> Both countries were awesome and interesting for me.

First, Australia has very pretty and spectacular nature, and especially has beautiful shores.

>> Australia has a spectacular sceneries especially the beaches.

Also, there are many activities which travelers can do such as a skydiving, a hanggliding, skin-scuba diving and so on.

>> In addition, there are a variety of activities for tourists to enjoy such as skydiving, hang gliding, scuba diving just to name a few.

So, you can enjoy the nature with piquant experiences. 

>> Therefore you would be able to have a zestful experience with nature.
Second, China has many marvelous relics such as a huge castle, a massive tomb of ancient king.

>> If your interests lie in viewing marvelous relics, castles and tombs of ancient rulers then China is the place for you.

Therefore you can learn the history of China and feel ancient people\'s achievements.

>> By touring this culturally rich place, you would be able to learn the history of China and take heart their past achievements.

Also, you can eat divergent dishes, because the magnitude of China is so big that there exists many different food. 

>> You would also be able to sample an assortment of dishes since China is quite expansive hence the flavors of their food differs per region.
If you like nature, I recommend you to travel Australia, and if you like feeling other culture and history, it is better to go to China.

>> If nature strikes your fancy, I would recommend a trip to Australia. However, if culture and history is more of your cup, it would be better for you to travel to China.