Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When was the last time you shopped around?
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Last Sunday, My wife and I went to the SEOMUN traditional market in DAEGU.
My wife wants to buy blue jean trousers.
Nowadays the flared blue jean is in fashion.
So we shopped around many stores in SEOMUN market.
As a result of the shopped around, my wife bought a flared blue jean with low price.
But I was very tired because I followed my wife when she shopped around.
강사 첨삭
Nice one!
You had some quality time with your gorgeous wife, James. Isn\'t that amazing?
I am truly pleased.
I hope you would do that more often. It\'s like back in the day.
I know how tiring shopping could be but I know that in spite of that, you really had so much fun. I am so happy for you!
Make your next day off count with your wife, my friend!
-Klein-
When was the last time you shopped around?==> Last Sunday, My wife and I went to the SEOMUN traditional market in DAEGU.
>>Last Sunday, my wife and I went to SEOMUN traditional market in Daegu.My wife wants to buy blue jean trousers.>>My wife wanted to buy blue jeans.
>>My wife wanted to buy blue trousers.
Nowadays the flared blue jean is in fashion.>>Nowadays, the flared blue jeans are in fashion.
So we shopped around many stores in SEOMUN market.>>So we shopped around many stores in SEOMUN market.
As a result of the shopped around, my wife bought a flared blue jean with low price.>>As a result of shopping around, my wife bought flared blue jeans at a low price.
But I was very tired because I followed my wife when she shopped around.
>>Correct!
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