Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you find shooting something full of holes?
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When I finished my work, I try to find shooting something full of holes.
As a result of my activity, what is good and what is bad for the company.
If I am the boss of the company, I think seriously what I did is good for or not good for the company.
From the change of viewpoint, I can find what I did is well done or not.
But it is difficult to change the viewpoint.
It needs a effort but I think it will be very useful when it comes to custom.
강사 첨삭
You got it!
You just made a whole lot of sense here once more, James. Thank you for always sharing your ideas with me.
It is important for us to have this habit of questioning ourselves and looking from all angles before we even make some complaints or something.
These words of yours just inspired me. Once again, thank you!
Today, I checked two compositions from you and I feel so great. How did you feel answering two questions?
If you want more, please let me know.
I would be more than willing to ask you as many questions as I can.
Until our next chat!
-Klein-
How do you find shooting something full of holes?==> When I finished my work, I try to find shooting something full of holes.>>When I finished my work, I would try to shoot something full of holes.
As a result of my activity, what is good and what is bad for the company.>>Correct
If I am the boss of the company, I think seriously what I did is good for or not good for the company.>>If I were the boss of the company, I think seriously whether what I did is good for the company.
From the change of viewpoint, I can find what I did is well done or not.>>From the change of viewpoint, I could know whether what I did is well done (or not).
But it is difficult to change the viewpoint.>>Correct
It needs a effort but I think it will be very useful when it comes to custom.
>>It needs effort but I think it will be very useful when it becomes a habit.
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