homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Activity: What are the pros and cons of keeping a pet?
<< agreement>>
Pets are good for forming rapport.
It can make sense of responsibility.
<< Opposition >>
There is more expenditure by pets.
You have to treat the pet carefully.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ana!^_^
A happy Thursday to you!
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
You had good ideas. It\'s just that there were unnecessary words in your sentences or the thought wasn\'t complete.
I appreciate your effort and we\'ll just talk about this in class.
See you later then! :)
~T. Mayleen (^_-)
<< agreement>>>> PROSPets are good for forming rapport.>> Having a pet is a good way to practice rapport.It can make sense of responsibility.>> It will help you to be more responsible.
<< Opposition >>>> CONSThere is more expenditure by pets.>> The expenditure is higher when you have a pet.You have to treat the pet carefully.
>> Correct!
OR: You have to treat it with care.
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