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... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
*CREATIVE WRITING: You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
REMEMBER: There are no rules. You can write a poem, a short story or an essay. Aim for a hundred words or aim for a hundred thousand. Just start writing, and have fun.


I will save money.

>> CORRECT!

But If I really want to buy something, it would be the books or Harry Potter goods.

>> However, if I really want to buy something, it would be the books of Harry Potter.

>> OR: However, if I really want to buy something, it would be the Harry Potter books and goods.

>> BETTER: However, if I really want to buy something, it would be the Harry Potter books and merchandise.

kkkkk.

>> Kkkkk.

I am a huge potter head, but their goods and books are too expensive to buy for students.

>> I am a huge Potter head, but their goods and books are too expensive for students to buy.

>> OR: I am a huge fan of Harry Potter, but their goods and books are too expensive for students to buy.

So If I have enough money, I will buy them.

>> Therefore, if I have enough money, I will buy them.

Ah It\'s too dangerous imagination.

>> Ah! It\'s too dangerous to imagine.

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>> Kkkk.