homework

Happy Thursday [이름]!

It\'s a little bit gloomy here. How about there?

I hope you have a great weather.

Anyway, I read your composition and I was impressed once again with your sentences.

There were just a few minor mistakes I want to point out.

Always have parallelism in your sentences. You cannot compare a noun to a verb.

Also, always add articles or prepositions if necessary.

If you have some questions, please ask them in class.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

I would like to meet Thomas Edison.

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One reason why I would like to meet him is because I admire his consistency when he decides there are things worth inventing.

If I get to meet him, I think I\'d ask about his inventions and why he decided they were necessary.

I think I would show my admiration on his curiosity and his personality in trying without giving up.

I would probably ask what he regretted most in his life, and how he could have improved those things.

You can learn a lot from a inventor or a scientist, but I personally think you can learn more life - changing lessons from a person\'s life.

I think those lessons are more important than studying science.

Those lessons can lead to make an entire person\'s life more successful.

I would also like to ask if he knew that people in future would remember his name and his inventions.

I might even write a book from the interview if I decide there are things I should share with the world.

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