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If I had only two days to live I think I would live my second-to-last day to meet all my friends and do all the things I wanted to do. I don't think I would day good-bye though. First, saying would be too hard for both me and my friends. And second, I think they wouldn't really understand even if I told them, and it would be too awkward. I just want the day to be normal and in some ways special. And on my last day, I think I would see everything I wanted to see and everything I wanted to do. I might as well try to be grateful. There aren't many people on Earth who gets to know when they'll die and certainly not everyone can prepare for it. So I think I'll be grateful that I got to see it all and experience it all before I die. I think I would very much like to die on a beach, hearing the roaring of the waves and gazing at the bright stars. Not many people get to choose where and how to die and I think I'll be lucky that I got to choose those things and that I died with no pain at all.
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Happy Friday [이름]!
You are completely right!
How nice would it be to know when we\'re going to die.^^
I think other people would probably give the same answer.
They would also enjoy their last days with their family and friends.
Make the most of your weekend!
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
If I had only two days to live I think I would live my second-to-last day to meet all my friends and do all the things I wanted to do.
>>> Correct!
I don\'t think I would day good-bye though.
>>> Correct! [say]
First, saying would be too hard for both me and my friends.
>>> Correct!
And second, I think they wouldn\'t really understand even if I told them, and it would be too awkward.
>>> Correct!
I just want the day to be normal and in some ways special.
>>> Correct!
And on my last day, I think I would see everything I wanted to see and everything I wanted to do.
>>> And on my second day, I think I would see everything I wanted to see and do everything I wanted to do.
I might as well try to be grateful.
>>> Correct!
There aren\'t many people on Earth who gets to know when they\'ll die and certainly not everyone can prepare for it.
>>> Correct!
So I think I\'ll be grateful that I got to see it all and experience it all before I die.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: SO I think I\'ll be grateful that I got to see and experience it all before I die.
I think I would very much like to die on a beach, hearing the roaring of the waves and gazing at the bright stars.
>>> Correct!
Not many people get to choose where and how to die and I think I\'ll be lucky that I got to choose those things and that I died with no pain at all.
>>> Not many people get to choose where and how to die and I think I would be lucky that I got to choose those things and died with no pain at all.
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