Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Which would you shell out a lot of money for?
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Nowadays my wife started the golf lesson in the driving range.
So she has to shell out many things golf clubs, driver, wood, putter and bags.
As you know, the golf club is very expensive.
In my case, I started the golf with used clubs from received my senior colleague.
But woman's case is different.
They compare the maker of their golf clubs, and they check the golf clubs price.
And they didn't want to use the used clubs.
So I spend a lot of money to buy golf equipment, bags and lesson fee.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, James!
Thanks for completing your homework. I think I am becoming slow at checking them. Please forgive me.
One thing is for sure; I will check your compositions no matter what.
At least, you can check them anytime you are free.
Also, I am glad that you shell out money for your other half. If that makes her happy, so be it.
But of course, never allow yourself to go bankrupt, my friend.
I hope that this day is treating you well.
And wow, you sure are full of surprises again! You sent me another composition.
I will catch you there!
-Klein-
Which would you shell out a lot of money for?==>Nowadays my wife started the golf lesson in the driving range.
>>Nowadays, my wife started her golf lesson in the driving range.So she has to shell out many things golf clubs, driver, wood, putter and bags.
>>So, she has to shell out a lot of money for many things like golf clubs, drivers, wood, putters, and bags.As you know, the golf club is very expensive.>>Correct!
In my case, I started the golf with used clubs from received my senior colleague.>>In my case, I started golf with the used clubs I received from my senior colleague.
But woman\'s case is different.>>But in women\'s case, it is different.
They compare the maker of their golf clubs, and they check the golf clubs price.>>They compare the makers of their golf clubs, and they check the golf clubs\' prices.
And they didn\'t want to use the used clubs.>>And they don\'t want to use secondhand clubs.
So I spend a lot of money to buy golf equipment, bags and lesson fee.
>>So, I spend a lot of money to buy golf equipment and bags, and pay for the lesson fee.
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