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Are you sharp?
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I can say No in your question.
As you know, I am a conservative and I don't have any talent to make someone smile.
Also I am not good at speaking my opinion when there are many people.
I am a quiet person.
And I forget something easily what I think because I am older and older.
There is a limit in my memory so It's too hard to remember something related me.
I usually do not sharp but foolish.
If I am smart person, I can speak what I want and I cannot hesitate speaking in front of people.
I envy that kind of person and I think they are sharp person.
강사 첨삭
I was hoping you\'d say, \"YES!\"
Nonetheless, I am glad you were able to support your answer. Of course, I do not totally agree to some parts, especially when you said that you do not have the talent to make someone smile. You always make someone smile; I guess me!
And of course, your family!
The thing that I cannot argue with is the limit of our memory.
I just hope that you would soon overcome some of your lapses. Never stop trying, my friend.
Thank you for sharing!
May you continue to have a wonderful afternoon.
-Klein-
Are you sharp?==> I can say No in your question.
>>I can say, \"No\" to your question.As you know, I am a conservative and I don\'t have any talent to make someone smile.
>>As you know, I am conservative and I don\'t have any talent to make someone smile.Also I am not good at speaking my opinion when there are many people.>>Also, I am not good at expressing my opinion when there are many people.
I am a quiet person.>>Correct!
And I forget something easily what I think because I am older and older.>>And I forget something easily because I am getting older and older.
There is a limit in my memory so It\'s too hard to remember something related me.>>There is a limit to my memory, so it\'s too hard to remember something related to me.
I usually do not sharp but foolish.>>I am not usually sharp but foolish.
If I am smart person, I can speak what I want and I cannot hesitate speaking in front of people.>>If I were a smart person, I could speak what I want to and would not hesitate even in front of people.
I envy that kind of person and I think they are sharp person.
>>I envy that kind of person and I think he is sharp!
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