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I agree with the above statement that people\'s greed is infinite.

>> I agree with the above statement that people\'s greediness is infinite.

Average people always want to have something more. 

>> CORRECT 

I think there are two reasons.

>>   CORRECT 
First, it is a human\'s instinct.

>> First, it is human instinct.

People always want to eat more delicious food and to wear more beautiful clothes and to live a more expansive house.

>>  People always want to eat more delicious food, to wear more beautiful clothes and to live in a more expansive house.

Since they did not experience all kind of life, they could have curiosity about the different life, and hope to experience the life.

>> Since they haven\'t experienced that kind of life so they are curious to experience that kind of life.
Second, it is a economical reason.

>> Second, it\'s economical.

There are always uncertainty in the future, so people want to prepare the risk that might come.

>>  CORRECT 

Therefore, even if people have a lot of money at present, unpredicted accidents such as downfall of business can destroy all their wealth. 

>> Therefore, even if people have a lot of money at present, unpredicted accidents such as downfall of business can vanish their weath into thin air.
I think that we don\'t need to blame them, if they do not accumulate their money by unethical and illegal ways.

>> I think we don\'t have to blame them as long as they didn\'t get their money from unethical or unlawful or illegal ways.