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Good morning, Sir!
How are you feeling today? I hope you have completely recovered from your sore throat TT
Anyway, thank you for doing our homework despite your condition TT
I strongly believe that studying overseas opens a lot of remarkable opportunities.
First, it widens our horizon by experiencing a different culture.
Second, it allows us to step out of our comfort zone.
Lastly, it helps us discover new things about ourselves! See you, Sir!
Going abroad always makes us excited, regardless of whether to go for traveling or studying.
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About 10 years ago, Korea had the most students studying abroad in the world.
>> About 10 years ago, Korea had the most number of students studying abroad in the world.
Still, along with Chinese and Japanese, a great number of Korean students are deciding to move a different country for higher studies.
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I think it has more benefits than problems.
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Nowadays, someone who wants to be a professor at college has to be able to lecture in English because of many foreign students from several countries.
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A lot of companies including medium sized companies are expanding globally to look for better places to make and sell their products.
>> A lot of companies including medium-sized companies are expanding globally to look for better places to make and sell their products.
It is very natural for them to try to recruit regional experts who can speak the local language.
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Many foreign companies amicably need foreigners to apply cultural diversity to their products.
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In some article, someone said that if he had stayed in Korea and sought a job, he would n\'t have gotten his current stable and great job in a foreign country.
>> In some article, someone said that if he had stayed in Korea and sought a job, he wouldn\'t have gotten his current stable and great job in a foreign country.
This Power English was also designed by the founder who has experienced studying abroad.
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