Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Write an essay about the person you admire the most. Include the reasons why you admire this person.
I admire my mother the most.
We normally said that women are weak but mothers are strong. I totally agree with this and my mom is really strong.
Not only physically also mentally. She had been doing many jobs to raise me.
I had not noticed that she had difficulties in her work when I was young but now I can feel how hard chainring the jobs.
She started working as a kindergarten teacher, an officer, a businesswomen, and a delivery. I can not imagine that how she did those work. She always tells that she can do this because of the family. Sometimes I feel very sorry that I can not do anything for her but when she is old, I will do for her just like how she did for me.
I really admire my mom!
강사 첨삭
Thanks a lot MISS [이름]!
I agree with you.
Parenting is the most difficult job.
It is like working for 24 hours without expecting any compensation.
I admire your mom just like how I admire other mothers who never give up for their children.
I hope your mom lives a long and healthy life.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^
I admire my mother the most.
>>> Correct!
We normally said that women are weak but mothers are strong.
>>> Correct!
I totally agree with this and my mom is really strong.
>>> Correct!
Not only physically also mentally.
Not only physically also mentally.
>>> Not only physically but also mentally.
She had been doing many jobs to raise me.
>>> Correct!
I had not noticed that she had difficulties in her work when I was young but now I can feel how hard chainring the jobs.
I had not noticed that she had difficulties in her work when I was young but now I can feel how hard chainring the jobs.
>>> Correct! [chaining]
She started working as a kindergarten teacher, an officer, a businesswomen, and a delivery.
She started working as a kindergarten teacher, an officer, a businesswomen, and a delivery.
>>> She started working as a kindergarten teacher, an office worker, a businesswoman and a delivery person.
I can not imagine that how she did those work.
>>> I can not imagine how she did those work.
She always tells that she can do this because of the family.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes I feel very sorry that I can not do anything for her but when she is old, I will do for her just like how she did for me.
>>> OR: Sometimes I feel very sorry that I can not do anything for her but when she is already old, I will take care of her like how she takes care of me.
I really admire my mom!
I really admire my mom!
>>> Correct!
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