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As the growing of the city, green space in the city have been diminished.

>> As the cities are developed, the green spaces are slowly diminishing.

However green space in the city is necessary for subsequent reasons.

>> However, green spaces in the city are necessary for subsequent reasons.
First of all, that places provide resting area for citizens.

>> First, it provides resting area for citicens.

People want to have a convenient place to spend time with their family or friends.

>> CORRECT  

They can enjoy their working-out such as running and breathe fresh air.

>> They enjoy working out such as running around.
Second, they supplies beauty for people.

>> Second, it gives a good scenery for people to look at.

People living in a city don\'t usually have many chances to see beautiful scenery. 

>> People living in the city don\'t usually have chances to see beautiful sceneries.

Therefore natural beauty in the city makes people\'s eyes enjoyable. 

>> Therefore, people enjoy nature because of it\'s beauty.
In order to protect these natural beauty, the city and government have to regulate the haphazard development.

>> In order to protect the natural beauty, the city government should regulate a haphazard order.

There is a good example in the NewYork city, which is the Central park.

>> One good exam is the Central park in New York city.

The Central park is located between the high buildings, and have been the good place for Newyorkers.

>> The Central park is located between high buildings and it has been a good place for New Yorkers.