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2017-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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What are the things that you need to shrug off? ==> After I do something, I always check that there is some problems or not what I did. If I found some mistakes, I thought seriously why I did like that. Because of my habit, I regretted about my mistakes, and I think how can I fix it. It is very difficult to fix it because I don't know when I do something. I Know that there is no solution, so I try not to make a mistake when I do something. I hope that I don't check after work and I need to shrug off those things. What I do like that, I think, is good for my health.

강사 첨삭

Aha! You sure are aware of what you need to shrug off, my friend. This is promising! I hope that after realizing this, you do something about it, and the good effects somehow materialize. It will take time, which is the challenge but you can make it happen. I trust you completely, James! I hope that you also trust yourself. Thank you for sharing, and oh, there\'s another one. I sure cannot keep up with you these days. Catch you then! -Klein- What are the things that you need to shrug off?==> After I do something, I always check that there is some problems or not what I did. >>After I do something, I always check whether there are some problems with what I did.If I found some mistakes, I thought seriously why I did like that. >>If I found some mistakes, I thought seriously why I did that.Because of my habit, I regretted about my mistakes, and I think how can I fix it.>>Because of my habit, I regret committing mistakes, and think about how I can fix them. It is very difficult to fix it because I don\'t know when I do something.>>It is very difficult to fix them because I don\'t know when I do something wrong. I Know that there is no solution, so I try not to make a mistake when I do something. >>Correct I hope that I don\'t check after work and I need to shrug off those things.>>I hope I won\'t need to check my work and shrug off those things. What I do like that, I think, is good for my health. >>What I do, I think, is good for my health.

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