homework
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I think I'd welcome almost every award if it's given with good meaning. If I could choose a award, I think I'd like to get one when I worked hard enough and when I thought about giving up. That way, I'll know that only when you try without giving up, there's a award. That way, It'll be like giving an award to myself that I tried hardest. It will be a constant reminder that there is always a prize for those who do not give up. I'll also be proud of myself that I got the award with my own wits and attempt. It'll also be kind of satisfying, I think. Because if I tried and experienced all possible combination and finally got an answer, I'll be satisfied that I actually made it.
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I think I\'d welcome almost every award if it\'s given with good meaning.
>>> Correct!
If I could choose a award, I think I\'d like to get one when I worked hard enough and when I thought about giving up.
>>> Correct!
That way, I\'ll know that only when you try without giving up, there\'s a award.
>>> That way, I\'ll know only when you try without giving up that there\'s an award.
That way, It\'ll be like giving an award to myself that I tried hardest.
>>> It\'ll be like giving an award to myself since I tried my best.
It will be a constant reminder that there is always a prize for those who do not give up.
>>> Correct!
I\'ll also be proud of myself that I got the award with my own wits and attempt.
>>> Correct!
It\'ll also be kind of satisfying, I think.
>>> Correct!
Because if I tried and experienced all possible combination and finally got an answer, I\'ll be satisfied that I actually made it.
>>> Correct!
>>> Correct!
If I could choose a award, I think I\'d like to get one when I worked hard enough and when I thought about giving up.
>>> Correct!
That way, I\'ll know that only when you try without giving up, there\'s a award.
>>> That way, I\'ll know only when you try without giving up that there\'s an award.
That way, It\'ll be like giving an award to myself that I tried hardest.
>>> It\'ll be like giving an award to myself since I tried my best.
It will be a constant reminder that there is always a prize for those who do not give up.
>>> Correct!
I\'ll also be proud of myself that I got the award with my own wits and attempt.
>>> Correct!
It\'ll also be kind of satisfying, I think.
>>> Correct!
Because if I tried and experienced all possible combination and finally got an answer, I\'ll be satisfied that I actually made it.
>>> Correct!
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