homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Creative Writing: What springs to mind when you hear the word 'school'? Why do you think it is that many children don't like school?
When I think of school, I think of my friends.. !
The reason why children hate school is because of studying.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!(^-^)
Happy Thursday!
Thank you so much for finding time to do your homework.
Your composition is short yet straight to the point.^^
Maybe we can discuss this in our class later. What do you say? ^_-
See you then! :)
_T. Mayleen :)
When I think of school, I think of my friends.. !
>> When I hear the word \'school\', I think of my friends.
The reason why children hate school is because of studying.
>> The reason why children hate school is because of studying isn\'t easy nor fun.
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