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2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Writing Activity: Are you good at keeping secrets? Why or why not? I think I'm keeping a promise. Because I try to keep my promise because I must keep it.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!

(^_____^)//

 

Both keeping a promise and keeping a secret are not that easy.

However, things like these can make or break relationships such as friendship.

Maybe we can talk about this in class. See you later! ^^

 

_T. Mayleen :)

 

I think I\'m keeping a promise.

>> I think I\'m better at keeping a promise than a secret.

 Because I try to keep my promise because I must keep it.

>> It\'s because I try my best to keep my promises.

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