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I can fortunately say that learning a language can definitely be an advantage :)
It is actually considered an edge in our competitive world!
I am so lucky because I can speak basic Korean, and through that, I gained a lot of wonderful friends^^
See you tomorrow, Sir!
I completely agree that the advantages provided by English as \"global language\" will continue to outweigh the disadvantages.
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Anyway, we need to use an international official language whatever it is because of international meetings and trades.
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I\'ve heard that Chinese speakers are much more than English speakers.
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However, I think that English alphabet-using people would be much more than Chinese character-using people because most Europeans are using
English alphabet.
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When it comes to language, most Koreans have to learn four languages at least.
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We have to learn Chinese characters, English, a second foreign language and Korean.
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Learning foreign languages costs a lot and requires a lot of hard work all our lives long.
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The only way to prosper our resource-poor country is to export our quality products, manpower and plants to the world.
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English for Koreans is an indispensable thing just like an personal arms for warriors.
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Contrarily, hard working to learn foreign languages could make our people more wise.
>>Contrarily, working hard to learn foreign languages could make our people wiser.
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