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2017-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I completely agree that the advantages provided by English as "global language" will continue to outweigh the disadvantages. Anyway, we need to use an international official language whatever it is because of international meetings and trades. I've heard that Chinese speakers are much more than English speakers. However, I think that English alphabet-using people would be much more than Chinese character-using people because most Europeans are using English alphabet. When it comes to language, most Koreans have to learn four languages at least. We have to learn Chinese characters, English, a second foreign language and Korean. Learning foreign languages costs a lot and requires a lot of hard work all our lives long. The only way to prosper our resource-poor country is to export our quality products, manpower and plants to the world. English for Koreans is an indispensable thing just like an personal arms for warriors. Contrarily, hard working to learn foreign languages could make our people more wise.

강사 첨삭

I can fortunately say that learning a language can definitely be an advantage :)

It is actually considered an edge in our competitive world!

I am so lucky because I can speak basic Korean, and through that, I gained a lot of wonderful friends^^

See you tomorrow, Sir!

I completely agree that the advantages provided by English as \"global language\" will continue to outweigh the disadvantages.

>>CORRECT!
 Anyway, we need to use an international official language whatever it is because of international meetings and trades.

>>CORRECT!
 I\'ve heard that Chinese speakers are much more than English speakers.

>>CORRECT!
 However, I think that English alphabet-using people would be much more than Chinese character-using people because most Europeans are using

English alphabet.

>>CORRECT!
 When it comes to language, most Koreans have to learn four languages at least.

>>CORRECT!
 We have to learn Chinese characters, English, a second foreign language and Korean.

>>CORRECT!
 Learning foreign languages costs a lot and requires a lot of hard work all our lives long.

>>CORRECT!
 The only way to prosper our resource-poor country is to export our quality products, manpower and plants to the world. 

>>CORRECT!
 English for Koreans is an indispensable thing just like an personal arms for warriors.

>>CORRECT!
 Contrarily, hard working to learn foreign languages could make our people more wise.

>>Contrarily, working hard to learn foreign languages could make our people wiser.



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