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If I had to go back in time. I would to go when I was started to join a company working now. I entered the company as like another people. I have worked this company for 20 years. although my company is not first position in same industry, but it was quitely stable and little by little improved in all aspects. this is the reason that I continuously stayed one company.
but, I think that when I was young man, I didn\'t want to take an adventure and lacked ambitious.
now. I have difficult to take an adventure owing to all of situation surround me than before. but I will try to another chance in my life. I don\'t want futher more regret!
>> If I have turn back time, I would go back to the time I started to join the company I\'m working now. I entered the company just like any other people. I have worked at this company for 20 years. Although our company is not in the first position in the industry, but it is quite stable and little by little it improved in all aspects. That is the main reason why I continuously stayed in one company. I think when I was young man, I didn\'t take adventures and I lack ambitions. Now, I\'m having difficulties to take adventures not like the situation I had before but I will try another chance in life. I don\'t want further regrets!
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