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I heard about \"White Lies\" and I often told those kind of lies.
>> I have about White Lies before and I often tell those kind of lies.
Lying is not good things, but I think that telling \"white Lies\" is not bad because this those kind of lies don\'t have one\'s intention and one\'s own interests.
(or One\'s intention and one\'s own interests don\'t include in \"White Lies\".)
>> Lying is not a good thing. But, I think white lies aren\'t all that bad if the person didn\'t intend to do it.
>> OR : Lying is not a good thing. On second thought, white lies are not so bad when they have good intentions.
When I was in the army, Whenever my subordinates make mistakes I said a good word for him and told white Lies such as \" he is great but he need more time to adapt \" to senior of corps rather than reporting on his mistakes.
>> When I was in the army and a subordinate of mine makes a mistake, I always tell him kind words. I also tell white lies to my seniors such as \"He is great but, he needs more time to adapt, rather than reporting his mistakes.
The reason I did that is I don\'t want petty problems let him get punished.
>> The reason why I did that is because I don\'t want to create petty problems and let him get punished.
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