homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing Activity: If you were President of Korea, what would you do to improve Koreans' health?
If i am President of Korea. I will make law concerning the Company.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! ^.^
This composition is really short.
But I still appreciate your effort.
You could have been more specific and more detailed.
Anyway, see you on Monday! Have a nice weekend!
_T. Mayleen (^-^)
If i am President of Korea. I will make law concerning the Company.
>> If I was the president of Korea, I\'d make law concerning comapnies that produce or manufacture food products.
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