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2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: Is being divorced a social stigma in your country? [Stigma means a mark of shame or discredit.] I think yes, being divorced is a social stigma in my country until now, athough divorce rate has been increasing rapidly. Especially, when we have our children get married, if the parents of our children's parter was divorced, I seem to dislike the situation. But because divorce rate is increasing rapidly in Korea, I think divorce may become the normal course of human life someday.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Hwa Shin! A happy Monday to you! (^___^)//   Thank you for this composition. I\'ve read it well. There\'s no divorce in my country yet. We only have annulment which is a longer process when married couples want to dissolve their marriage. It might soon be regarded as a normal situation in the future, still many divorcees and their children face such stigma.   See you later in class.^^   _T. Mayleen :)   I think yes, being divorced is a social stigma in my country until now, athoughdivorce rate has been increasing rapidly. >> CORRECT! Especially, when we have our children get married, if the parents of our children\'s parter was divorced, I seem to dislike the situation.>> For example, I seem to dislike the situation when my children\'s partners\' parents were divorced. But because divorce rate is increasing rapidly in Korea, I think divorce may become the normal course of human life someday. >> But because the divorce rate is increasing rapidly in Korea, I think it\'ll become a normal situation in the future.

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