Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! :)
I haven\'t tried going to a fortuneteller yet.
But I\'ve been planning to for a long time now.
I get really excited when I think of it.
Do you believe in such things?
That they can really tell your fortune?
I think I do believe in horoscopes, though.
By birth, I am an Aries.
How about you? :)
--- Teacher JACEY ^_^)/
Have you ever gone see a fortuneteller?
>> Correct!
>> OR : Have you ever tried to see a fortune teller?
We have some Korean style fortunetellers.
>> Correct!
I went there before and the fortuneteller said to me, \"You are like a cat. Because you are a picky person\".
>> Correct!
Then she said \"You need to hide your picky mind in your life.\"
>> Correct!
And I just thought myself. I had no choice but to agree her opinions.
>> And I just thought o myself, I had no choice but to agree with her opinions.
A cat tends to enjoy oneself.
>> Correct!
And cats are sharp in observation and charismatic that we don\'t know why they have charisma in detail.
>> And cats have sharp observation skills and are charismatic that we don\'t even know why they have charisma in detail.
>> And cats have sharp observation skills and are charismatic that we don\'t even know why they are alluring.
They have no power like a tiger.
>> Correct!
I think I am like a cat as she said.
>> Correct!
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